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出句:疏钟落尽青山寂【潇湘妃子】 |
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诗?寺?
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对仗挺工整的,谢谢赐句~
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出句以钟声消歇写山静,对句以美酒斟尽衬月孤,物象与情感统一,不错,谢谢赐对~
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朱鲤喧,很活泼,谢谢赐句~
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花甲归来仍少年。
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空谷幽,不错,谢谢赐句~
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